show, dont tell.

The party was awesome.

The party was awesome, all of my friends were there, there was loud music and even food! We sat around and talked, danced to the music, and ate all of the food. We played games on the playstation.


I got an A and i felt great.

When i saw that paper with an A on it i jumped straight up from my desk and started jumping and dancing all around. My hair was going everywhere, black hair looking like a crow fyling. I was cheering so loud that me teacher came over and told me to get out of class. I was so excited that i had gotten an A on the hardest test of the year.




Mr. Stearns is the greatest teacher ever.




My computer is my best friend.




Yesterday I was very bored.